well i dont see much problems but maybe thats because i have a more cartoony artstyle
#What can i improve
wanton wigeon
icy mason
well i dont see much problems but maybe thats because i have a more cartoony art...
im gonna need more advice than that😭😭
wanton wigeon
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shy fable
lighting, materials/different fabrics , the use of emptyspace compared to canvas, lineart [everyline is the same widht which atleast for me doesnt look ideal], chest study could help you alot too, eyes in different perspective too ig becuz on the police one the eyes should have been in perspective more,
icy mason
lighting, materials/different fabrics , the use of emptyspace compared to canvas...
woah man too much information at once, do it one at a time
shy fable
woah man too much information at once, do it one at a time
yeah my bad
icy mason
COLOUR THEORY
you need to be more specific man saying color theory is too vague, what about my colors are off so i know what to fix?
as for composition that more or less just comes with practice i suppose
topaz lark
you need to be more specific man saying color theory is too vague, what about my...
The colours don't go very well together
Study different types of colour palettes to implement
Also study tone, hue and saturation within the colour wheel it also plays a big part
icy mason
The colours don't go very well together
it isn't the colors i got help and they said it was the lighting thanks though
minor dew
it isn't the colors i got help and they said it was the lighting thanks though
The colors are definitely not ideal either. If you turn the saturation down you can see there is no contrast in the colors and that makes it look bland and washed out. Adding variety in the base colors will make it look more interesting
Let me show what I mean
icy mason
decided to change up some of her design
pine solar
It feels like you have the exact same expression in each piece. The cake batter one also feels disconnected from the rest. It doesn’t really feel like the subject is interacting with the rest
minor dew
This is the original drawing when you turn the saturation all the way down
icy mason
added more variety
icy mason
This is the original drawing when you turn the saturation all the way down
i dont plan on redoing that one but i understand what you mean lol
wait nvm (so glad i do colors on separate layers)
minor dew
i dont plan on redoing that one but i understand what you mean lol
Yeah just saying what I see in your drawings
Forgot to make an updated version lol but yeah that looks better
silk ermine
do you mean like in general or just these few pieces?
icy mason
do you mean like in general or just these few pieces?
mb forgot to close this, already got the help i wanted