Help with rendering

[burnt lagoon]

I think Something’s off with the iris or something else maybe? It’s supposed to be a rendering practice ( trying to get rid of lineart)
Pls pinpoint anything you want and any tips are appreciated

[wild edge]

Not a realism expert but maybe the shading on the eyelid could be a little more blended unless you are doing with a kind of hard edged/cell shaded style

Also I feel like the white part of the eye is too muddy with different colours I feel like it could be a bit more white

[vital urchin]

I disagree

I think the eye white looks great

idk about the eyelid, depends what you’re going for

[hoary wasp]

nahhh the eye white looks great

[hoary wasp]

for the iris, you should search references and copy the details

and i think you are missing top eyelashes

[burnt lagoon]

It was quite refreshing after looking a real eye ref ty
Here it is so far: