#Need help on shading and critics

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finite dawn
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this is professional, idk what you need advice for haha

ashen maple
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🙁

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no spoiler for fetish content?

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anyways

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they should look more like this, unless her hands are 2 seperate parts

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or she has a really wide palm

muted oriole
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I agree with zhav

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also

muted oriole
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So I did a few things that I personally think made it look better, but ofc it’s up to you, because I think it already looks good. Theres just subtle things.

For the hand I just darkened some values under the hand and between the fingers. I also subtly deepened the values on the tights and shirt where there wasn’t much light. Another thing was I made the highlights on her legs brighter! (except the underpart) just because I think it looks more appealing? It’s hard to describe. It will look ‘lighter’ as the tights stretch and expose skin, but certain materials of tights can also reflect light

(also added occlusion shadow under skirt)

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Basically I just pushed the values in those areas to cover more of the spectrum

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perhaps my changes may be more obvious like this?

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@bronze crescent lemme know what you think

bronze crescent
bronze crescent
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That does look better, I will try to fix this! Thank you for the help! 🙇