Hello guys
Been doing this drawing
What do you guys think?
Especially area
Anything will you do differently
Critics are most welcome
Thank you
#Is the face ok ?
primal shell
silk zinc
Maybe move the nose to the side
rough agate
The anatomy is actually very good, the only problem is the right side of her face is kinda wonky
rough agate
Maybe move the nose to the side
Yes!
primal shell
Maybe move the nose to the side
Ooo ok understand thx
primal shell
The anatomy is actually very good, the only problem is the right side of her fac...
Hey thx for the input
Sorry but i dont understand
Can please explain
The eyes not balance?
devout turtle
This looks great ngl. Imma guess what light hennich is trying to say, which is the character’s face could use some structure on the right side cuz as it is rn, it does kinda look like one big curve. Some other small things could also be not enough jaw (just a lil is enough, but having no jaw at all can look a bit wonky), and the eyes not being quite parallel. Other than that, I think it looks awesome. This image is for u to consider if u want to change it or not^^ (I might have brought the nose too much to the side, and accidentally changed the perspective🙏)
spiral solstice
The face is also not following the guidelines correctly. If you trace a line marking the direction of the bangs you'll see it doesn't match the angle of the rest of the face
Ignore the mouth and nose, they are just to indicate more or less where they should be placed according to the direction from the bangs
Actually ignore the last picture because it's not completely correct either. Here's the one
This one does match the bangs well
glass nacelle
Id lower the eyes and bangs at teh same time a bit then
And lower mouth nose a bit
Or its possible to keep face the same and align angle of the chin with the face
Idk how to explain bru 😭
spiral solstice
Id lower the eyes and bangs at teh same time a bit then
The chin is a bit low that's true but I do like the face proportions. Lowering the eyes, bangs and horns would make it look cuter tho
And now that I look at it the horns also have a weird angle lol
glass nacelle
Yea
quick zodiac
Seems like no highlights in the face or definition and seems like the face is falling flat
Maybe adding shading between the right eye and the nose to really show she's slightly turned
And maybe highlight the eyes
primal shell
This looks great ngl. Imma guess what light hennich is trying to say, which is t...
Oo ok
Thank you very much i will make the changes 😊
primal shell
Ignore the mouth and nose, they are just to indicate more or less where they sho...
Humu humu
Thank you very i will make the changes 😀
primal shell
Thx
primal shell
Id lower the eyes and bangs at teh same time a bit then
Humu humu thx for the input😀
primal shell
Maybe adding shading between the right eye and the nose to really show she's sli...
Ok got it
Thank you i will make the changes
Thx guys for the input ! Really appreciate it
spiral solstice
The head seems a little small but other than that, very cool!!