Is my lineart ok? | Art Club | Page 1

proven helm Nov 18, 2024, 7:53 AM

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Hello, I'm working on lineart for a commission and am planning on coloring soon. Is the lineart OK to start or do I need to fix some stuff still? Thank you 🙂

keen storm Nov 18, 2024, 8:12 AM

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I think its too stiff and the body shape is wrong

oak sand Nov 18, 2024, 8:44 AM

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proven helm Hello, I'm working on lineart for a commission and am planning on coloring soon....

very cool! but i think the posture is a little off. if the hands are in front she should be leaning forward more and her legs would be more positioned inwards and out? if u get me

proven helm Nov 18, 2024, 8:45 AM

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not rlly... wdym by the last part

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oak sand Nov 18, 2024, 8:50 AM

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so the thighs would be closer together and her legs would still go outwards kinda like this

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wait ill get reference

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closest thing i can find

odd pulsar Nov 18, 2024, 9:03 AM

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Your line art is a bit choppy especially in the face (jaw) and legs, the legs also seem to be different widths

proven helm Nov 18, 2024, 9:33 AM

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heres the reference btwt

buoyant ravine Nov 18, 2024, 10:37 AM

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This looks more like a sketch

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Make sure she lines on the outside of the body are thicker and the lines of the most important parts of the artwork are thicker

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There needs to be line weight and variation

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Try to have confident lines and not make them scratchy

#Is my lineart ok?