Ref sheet done, looking for crit! ^^

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Hey! So this is one of 3 ref sheets that I want to finish. I was looking for any crit anybody can give? :3

If you are interested in names, the Green is named Jeribbel and the Merman is named Xaiden! ^^

i noticed how the hands look pretty off but that’s ok for now.

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uhh

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For the green one the profile cranium looks too small for the face size

You also dont seem to be remembering that hair has mass on top of the head and drapes over it rather than being an independent shape

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lil confused on the hair part

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Your hair doesnt cut into your skull. It drapes over it

So why would it cut into your characters’ skull

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Ohhh

do u by chance have any examples of this?

[candid wraith]

An old drawing of mine but here you go. You need to have the shape of the cranium done and then draw the hair around it and make sure it is well distributed

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oh i see, ty