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wild pecan Nov 6, 2024, 10:02 PM

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heyy im doing a drawing of xilonen from genshin rn and smt abt the face looks off to me but i cant tell what and i would appreciate some critique

A_A_O

wild pecan Nov 6, 2024, 10:29 PM

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this is it with some more layers enabled for ref

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Help with face / i dont see whats wrong pls help

rough wave Nov 6, 2024, 10:32 PM

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Great job at trying more dynamic poses really cool to see

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I think it's because the lips don't have lineart, since the eye and nose have lineart the lips make it look a little incohesive

wild pecan Nov 6, 2024, 11:10 PM

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rough wave Great job at trying more dynamic poses really cool to see

First of all thank you!!
I added some more shading around the edges of the lips and a line in the middle for some more visual clarity, do you think its better?

rough wave Nov 7, 2024, 1:30 AM

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Yep! Looks great!

modest token Nov 9, 2024, 6:54 AM

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The mouth is too far to the left

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Flip your canvas youl

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You will be in for a surprised

wild pecan Nov 10, 2024, 2:28 PM

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modest token The mouth is too far to the left

do you think it’s better now?

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this is the whole pic btw if anything else catches your eye that i can change

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any feedback/ suggestions / does anything look off

modest token Nov 10, 2024, 4:43 PM

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Where the shading

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And the lighting

wild pecan Nov 10, 2024, 8:11 PM

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modest token Where the shading

added some more hard shading

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ancient vortex Nov 10, 2024, 8:27 PM

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wild pecan

only thing id say is that the belt looks like its just textured on if that makes sense? like around the side, it should be further out

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otherwise it looks amazing

golden leaf Nov 10, 2024, 8:34 PM

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I think her face abit round tho

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Should be sharper

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Looks hella cool tho

wild pecan Nov 10, 2024, 9:14 PM

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i updated the belt and for face shape i have 2 versions which do u like more @ancient vortex @golden leaf

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golden leaf Nov 10, 2024, 9:16 PM

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Prob 1

wild pecan Nov 11, 2024, 5:09 PM

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ok ty all for help im finally done https://x.com/milky__3131/status/1855780281912820120

˖˳⊹ 𝐉𝐚𝐧𝐚 ଓ ₊♡ (@milky__3131) on X

Xilonen x K/DA 💿💎

Xilonen if she collabed with K/DA. Been working on this for some time and it took me honestly way too long but yeah 😭

#GenshinImpact #GenshinImpact #Xilonen #fanart #KDA #genshinimpactart

last wind Nov 11, 2024, 5:13 PM

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Im unsure if this was mentioned

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(by the way this is amazing!!!)

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the hand does seem a bit off

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it could just be me

#any feedback/ suggestions / does anything look off