something feels off about this face, can somebody help?

[floral eagle]

maybe it's the nose or something but i can't help but feel its a bit off

[inner cliff]

I knowwww

The jaw needs to be more wider

[mossy swan]

those perspectives always look weird, we are not used to see them and anime/manga style stylizes the way jaws are drawn in many different ways

[inner cliff]

Smth like dis

[mossy swan]

it's good you practice those tho

[inner cliff]

Maybe up the left ear a bit up

Hmmmmm

[floral eagle]

oh its not an ear its a headphone thing

[inner cliff]

Lmao mb

Lemme mek it more thicc

Mmmmm

Much bettah

@floral eagle bro :] , im pretty sure ur very much more experienced than me

Does this mek sense

I adjusted the jaw because her head is tilted a bit to the right

Nvm i needa adjust again

Erm

Ye

I think dis better?

Nvm

Mb

[mossy swan]

at this point, it's better to look at references

[floral eagle]

thanks for all your help anyways :)

[inner cliff]

😞

Goodluck

[vocal sand]

@floral eagle Hi, I think it may be the eyes as well as some other minor things that’s making the drawing seem a bit off. I don’t really draw many low angle, but I hope this can help u🙏

ik It’s no where near perfect, but I think with the eyes being wrapped around now, hopefully it looks more natural now

might have to wrap around the eyes even more tbh with such a low angle, but that’ll for you to experiment