hair took me ages lol. i would love advice before i start rendering and stuff ❤️
#any advice?
stuck scarab
the red line is your proportions, the blue line is the reference
Also her eye that's behind the hairs is not looking at the viewer
bronze raven
Also her eye that's behind the hairs is not looking at the viewer
does my recent image look like it’s looking at the viewer now? or does it still not look like it?
bronze raven
the red line is your proportions, the blue line is the reference
ty i’ll fix the body proportions as best i can
stuck scarab
does my recent image look like it’s looking at the viewer now? or does it still ...
you can try adding pupils to see it
bronze raven
you can try adding pupils to see it
alr will do that when i start rendering. anything else i can fix?
bronze raven
ah i see
stuck scarab
alr will do that when i start rendering. anything else i can fix?
hmmm
prolly make the brush strokes thinner on the nose
because thats where the art is leading me towards, guide your viewers on what you want them to see in the art, in this case im being drawn towards the nose
bronze raven
ohh alr
bronze raven
better? @stuck scarab
i fixed the shoulders and nose lineart and tweaked cleavage a bit
stuck scarab
Yehh that's aight, although imma fix the body, cuz it looks like her back is starting from her armpit
bronze raven
wdym
stuck scarab
Aight hang on let me fire up my pc
you see that?
when drawing the torso in that angle, imagine it as a 3 dimensional box that connects to the back
this is oversimplifying my point right here, I think you'll get this
bronze raven
ah i see, so i drew the body wrong lol
well i’ll fix it tomorrow
will let u know when i fix it
fading relic
Shadows.
bronze raven
better? @stuck scarab
bronze raven
now that i look back on it i don’t think the perspective of the torso matches the rest of her body idk
bronze raven
does anyone have any other advice?
wide pivot
soften up the lineart