Tips?

[soft ivy]

This not so much being a plus sized advice but for colors and skin its important to try and make them easily discernible against each other. What you have rn are very similar to eachother and most people would assume theyre the same color. I recommend to either lighten or darken the hair

[tall ridge]

i was gonna make the hair black like normal, but i wouldn’t like right against the alr black lines, and then i was gonna lighten the hair but when i did it didn’t look right nor natural

[soft ivy]

You could give her dyed blonde hair. Ik theres a lot of poc who like their hair blonde

Also black hair isnt actually black. Most of the time black hair is actually really dark brown or really dark muted blue

Two examples showing two different ocs

[tall ridge]

ok

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[soft ivy]

Your brain still interprets it as black even tho it isnt really. You just gotta create the illusion of it

[sweet harbor]

i would make the lineart less thick, but thats just a stylistic choice thats up to you