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brazen idol Oct 18, 2024, 7:02 PM

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Hello! Can you give any opinion or criticism to the drawing?

delicate delta Oct 18, 2024, 7:05 PM

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Hi, I'm definitely a beginner, but as a viewer the pose looks very stiff to me

brazen idol Oct 18, 2024, 7:15 PM

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delicate delta Hi, I'm definitely a beginner, but as a viewer the pose looks very stiff to me

Stiff? How is this? As if pressed tightly to the ground?

ionic wave Oct 18, 2024, 7:53 PM

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I feel like this piece is nice but like when a professional artist make improvements it will be noticeable

dense glen Oct 18, 2024, 7:55 PM

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brazen idol Stiff? How is this? As if pressed tightly to the ground?

I think it might be the shoulders?

brazen idol Oct 18, 2024, 7:58 PM

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dense glen I think it might be the shoulders?

Shoulders too raised?

rocky tusk Oct 18, 2024, 7:59 PM

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brazen idol Shoulders too raised?

Yeah the shoulders are kinda too much raised up

brazen idol Oct 18, 2024, 8:08 PM

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Okay, I'll fix it

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Maybe something else?

marble locust Oct 18, 2024, 9:22 PM

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Her shoulders do a look a bit raised and her left arm looks stiff and is not as relaxed as the drawing portrays

jagged siren Oct 18, 2024, 10:29 PM

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Im not sure if this is intentional but her hair is a really similar shade as the grass around her, id recommend either darkening the grass or lightening her hair to make her face more of a focal point

ember tendon Oct 19, 2024, 6:58 AM

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Hi! Your art piece has really nice atmosphere and colors. The rendering well done too!

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With the concerns of the pose being stiff, I think it may come from the head being raised at an awkward angle. Instead of a relaxed posture it seems like the character is trying to raise their head forcibly. 🤔 and the right hand feels a bit unnatural, I think it will loosen the tension if they had it placed on their stomach.

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From this angle we should be seeing the face slightly from underneath, so we should see the bottom of the chin and the bottom of the nose 🤔

Overall your artwork is amazing! It has the quality to be a poster~! ✨

analog reef Oct 19, 2024, 2:37 PM

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the wing covering atop of her chest is creating a tangent with the crease of her left arm. I'd recommend moving the wing more closer to the middle of her chest- It makes it look like her upper arm is folded over the forearm and creates confusion.
her left leg is longer than her right, just move it a smidge bit up. Drawing (perspective?) lines in areas such as the shoulders, hips and knees to help keep things in proportion: seen in the pic (sorry i don't have my tablet rn its w a mouse lmao )

other than that, this piece is beautiful! i love the character design and delicacy of her look!! <3

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