I need help with correcting this sketch (pretty pretty please :,))

[rare gale]

Try cleaning it up I'll help u see the mistakes

[noble dune]

Oh my your peace is so good 😭

Piece

[stone matrix]

thank you it's for school and i've been procrastinating for three weeks😭

[noble dune]

I think you can define the eyebrow arch more

[stone matrix]

the eye placement really scares me

but yes

[noble dune]

I think it should be a little higher but not a lot

I think it's because the eyebrow is a lottle off perspective

Do you have a photo reference?

[stone matrix]

unfortunately i do not which is why it's wonky

😭

all in all it looks like my best friend

which means a little bit high

[noble dune]

The eyebrow is too high now it looks like he has it on his forehead

[stone matrix]

i had to push the hairline up yes

[noble dune]

And put the eyebrow lower

[stone matrix]

i can't do it

i accidentally deleted the eye

[noble dune]

Oh 😭

How

Where do you draw? Maybe you can review it back

[stone matrix]

i got it doesn the eyebrow work

[noble dune]

Think it should go like this

[stone matrix]

yes but where's the eyelid

[noble dune]

It disappeared because I cut out the eyebrow poorly 😭

[stone matrix]

i'm done now but help/critique is very welcome

[gritty edge]

Double check the perportions with the arm.

[stone matrix]

pls elaborate are they too short or

[gritty edge]

nvm if the wing covers it, it won't make much of a difference.

[flint magnet]

i made a few adjustments to the face but feel free to change it. also, i think there should be less hair on the right side of his face because this is a side profile, so the hair will be mostly hidden by his face.

[flint magnet]

the brow placement on mine looks a bit off

[stone matrix]

yes the brow placement confuses me

[stone matrix]

i did try to correct it but my anatomy knowledge is rusty af