so basically it looks too boring, and i dont know if i should just give up and restart or try and fix it
#lineart diff
subtle seal
oak current
Hey @subtle seal it looks amazing!
(There's nothing wrong with starting over, it's very common for artists to bin art that are still in the lineart stage)
But let's make it fun and see how we can immediately make this a bit more dynamic without actually changing much! ~
(i'm using MS paint with mouse, so apologies for the appalling linework~~)
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I've redlined the body, tilting the head whilst making the body curvature a little bit more dramatic to balance out the head tilt, and giving a bit more of a vibe with her shoulders slightly higher.
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Increased the shape language by using the blueline to enlarge the size of the clothe, this gives it a strong silhouette that makes it stand out
Hope this helps ~
subtle seal
cool!
yeah thats kind of what i was thinking of, a more dynamic pose
ill try to give it a go over later today
devout basin
second pose is more interesting
subtle seal
alr
ocean finch
perspective
subtle seal
perspective
elaborate
oak current
awesome work! the tilt of the head and the easiness to read the shapes of her clothing really stands out!