can someone rate this and maybe give some constructive criticism

[naive hinge]

It’s the ink demons from the popular horror game bendy and the ink machine

Please give feedback 🙏🙏

[modern fable]

You should add some shadows on the teeth and glove I think 🤷‍♂️

[naive hinge]

Good idea

[naive hinge]

Could you give constructive criticism on this one to

Only like 1 idea could do

[modern fable]

Sure! I’m not really sure but i think you could maybe fix the arm a bit? Like this maybe, idk though 😭🙏

[naive hinge]

For the arm holding the axe he’s meant to be holding it behind him so it looks smaller

[modern fable]

ohh

[naive hinge]

For the shoulders, he’s made of ink he’s meant to look deformed

[modern fable]

Ah ok, because he’s made of ink maybe like add slight drips on the arms

to make it a bit more obvious

but idk

[naive hinge]

It’s from the game bendy and the ink machine it is pretty oblivious

[modern fable]

yeah but just looks like a black figure otherwise 🤷‍♂️, lmao sorry I’m kinda dumb ngl