how to make this cooler

[woven bronze]

basically the title, i have a basic sketch and want to make it cooler. open to any suggestions or ideas like posing, outfits, perspectives, expressions, colors, etc... Using krita (blurred bc its nsfw rn lol)

blud 😭 😭 😭

thoughts ideas suggestions? unsure of the outfit on the left, right seems cool to me

[somber cradle]

Exaggerating the perspective of the drawing even more would create a lot more dynamicity and "oomph" to the overall feel of the piece, assuming that you want to go for something kinda powerful and badass

giving their hair a more defined curved flow will also contribute a lot to the dynamics of the piece, rather than it just flowing straight

[somber cradle]

.. to illustrate what I mean by more dynamics in the hair

[woven bronze]

interesting... that does look cooler

thoughts on dragon? feel like the scene is kindaplain with nohing in the background

[somber cradle]

yes!! would make for a fantastic focal point, and also clearer definition between foreground and background. to further enhance it, I recommend that you bring the closest parts of the body of the dragon even closer to the lens, so it separates the view even more to create dimension

[somber cradle]

like this for example

super cool idea btw

[woven bronze]

yea i think that looks a lot better

i think the dragon head could be cooler... its like not cool enough... you knoe?🤔

[somber cradle]

huge gritting teeth or open mouth is undefeated, I think going for the traditional Chinese dragon look would fit very well in

[woven bronze]

fuck it ill try