The reason why I hate rendering

[barren comet]

Hi there!
I think it looks a bit weird because of the anatomy of the face and shoulders
But your colours are on point, love them!!

[river swallow]

Thankyou so much for your feedback beside I draw using my phone and finger so it's hard to perfect the anatomy but anyway i will try harder next time 😁

[barren comet]

YOU DID THAT ON A PHONE???!!

[river swallow]

Yeap

[zealous crescent]

Center connects to neck

Not sure what we call it but yeah lol

(I determined the center by the belly button you drew)

ribcage is tilting so should the boob

[river swallow]

Ooops I did some major mistakes I am very thankful about your feedback. I will fix it later (not in mood to draw) thanks again 😁

[zealous crescent]

Your welcome 😄

[rich sky]

the eyes are too far apart still, the right eyes pupil is angled a bit wierd and the neck needs to be moved to the right, the center line of the breasts gotta move over to the right , the left one should be bigger as it is closer, you could add more lighting to the left side of the face

apart from that the rest of the shading and lighting looks great