#Need help with drawing a Manga Page (4 Panels Included)

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fickle mason
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Hii there. I have a manga page (for my original story) that has 4 panels.
Here is a sample of what I want to draw.
First panel- A male character is on the verge of death
Second panel (from a POV of a male character) - A male characters feet are visible and we see a girl on the floor. Her hands tied with chain over the top of her head and feet are tied too. Girl is screaming over that guy.
Third panel - The male character is receiving a phone call so he would be turned in this scene. The camera would be on the character's T-Shirt, the girl would be visible but blurred. (It is a bit different in the attached file, sry for that)
Fourth panel - A scene from camera on floor.
The male character has dropped his phone on the ground and the girl has broke the chains.
What I want is whatever help you guys can provide me.

simple pasture
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So do the middle ones have to be from that character’s pov? Ive seen very few times where thats happened. Normally you see the characters face having a phonecall. Also i feel you could expand this into several more panels. If you have too many words on one page or even on one panel it will look cluttered and will be unclear what is happening

fickle mason
fickle mason
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No one's replying 🙂

simple pasture
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Buddy im at work rn. I cant stop everything to respond the moment you do

fickle mason
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U responded me

simple pasture
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Not everyone is able to help with this sort of thing. Be patient

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This is a very niche question

fickle mason
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Gn

fickle mason
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Tq for this

simple pasture
fickle mason
simple pasture
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I dont follow

fickle mason
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simple pasture
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Yeah “…” doesnt clarify anything. Please rephrase it to try and help me understand

fickle mason
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And why you always talk so rude ☠️

simple pasture
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It wont deactivate after a day. It takes like a week

simple pasture
fickle mason
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I wrote everything I knew in the first message

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And about the pic, it's just there to give reference of what I want. It's not the exact panel

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This is the way reader would go through the page

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In the first, a character is lying on ground over his stomach, his face drenched in blood. Side view pic