Any criticism on this before i work on lineart?

[serene mason]

Refine the sketch. The sketch is really messy rn. If you refine the sketch it will be a lot easier for you to make lineart that looks right

[warm coral]

i tried refining it

[thin osprey]

a lot of anitomical issues esp with the arms
most glaring example is girl on the right’s arms are too thin and squiggly

[serene mason]

So what you did wasnt really refining. What you did was more of just do more big scratchy sketch. Refining the sketch means gradually streamlining and tidying it up

[iron schooner]

Forearm of girl on left is too big, hand of right girl way too small

Arm of on left of right girl doesnt rly make sense

[molten robin]

If you out your hand on your face it would be about the same size.

Hehe look at this guy 🤦‍♂️

I think anime heads tend to be bigger but it can help you figure out how big it should be.

[dusky timber]

can some one hlep mme see the problem with my right arm TvT

[molten robin]

I think you’re meant to make your own thread ;0;

[dusky timber]

oh it that so

idk how to use discord thb

thank

[molten robin]

Hehe all goods

[warm coral]

im at class rn but ill apply changes when i go home, thanks

[warm coral]

i tried applying those changes, heres the refs i used if it would also be helpful

[bleak zinc]

hands are still quite janky (tho they are always every artist's bane of existence 🥲 ). The thumb on the hand neck the wolf girl's neck is strange looking. straighten the left arm of the wolf girl. Everything else is lovely.

[molten robin]

OHMYGOSH ITS PROSEKAIIII

[warm coral]

yes

[warm coral]

adjustments (i guess we're putting trees and shit around it as well, also please do not look at the bottom left)

[robust pier]

This looks good! There’s something about the girl on the right’s face that looks a bit strange but I can’t really put it into words that make sense😭would you mind if I drew over ur drawing to explain?

[warm coral]

im fine with that, yes

[robust pier]

Okay so I just shifted some of what you had around a little bit, like the side piece of her hair and the end of her bangs as well as bringing her ear in closer to the face and repositioning the chin a little but that last part is really just a preference