How can I improve this sketch?

[celest onyx]

I want it to make it a bit like this image

[weary knot]

hey it's me from the WIP channel. cool reference choice.

you might want to foreshorten the right leg a bit more. Also don't be afraid to define your lines a bit more. for now just focus on completting the pose

[celest onyx]

This was the first sketch I made, if it's helpful

[celest onyx]

I will define them later, I want to make it clear first, also, I will put clothes on him later

[celest onyx]

Sorry, can you explain to me what is foreshorten? I'm not English native

[weary knot]

making an object appear to have more depth. in this case, its the right leg. it needs to look as if its coming towards the viewer.

[celest onyx]

Give me a minute

[weary knot]

sure. making the foot a bit bigger can help with that.

[celest onyx]

Better?

[weary knot]

that looks noticeably better👍

[celest onyx]

I made it a little bigger

[weary knot]

I'd narrow the thigh a bit.

[celest onyx]

ok

[weary knot]

also if you can, borrow inspiration from different drawing styles like anime/manga for example. good luck.

[celest onyx]

Thank you, I'm trying to have an style like anime but a bit more realist

Like with more details

But don't you see the guantlet thing rare?

[weary knot]

no i dont see it.

[celest onyx]

Anyways, thank you

[weary knot]

anytime. glad i could help. goodluck