Can I improve the composition?

[weak isle]

I tried to fit my characters into a rule of 3rds composition (after realizing it didn't have one🥲) and I would like some advice!

Orr, if it doesn't fit into this composition, is it composed well? (Whatever composition that may be)

[open lintel]

I think it's pretty alright, one thing you can change is your bottom right character. It would be better If they looked to the left or even up toward the other characters

that way you keep the focus within the piece

especially because they're on the side of the screen it's important to lead the eye back in rather than outside of the current composition

[weak isle]

Ty!

[formal walrus]

Its good i just feel like the bicycle looks pretty out of place and makes my eyes wonder over there rather than how the characters are layed out

[weak isle]

Thank you! If I still want to include it, where should I put it?

[formal walrus]

Im not sure, im just visulualising it right now so maybe the top right square? I dont think that would mess up the composition

[weak isle]

Is this good? 🤔

[weak isle]

Also do these colors match well?