#Feedback pls!!

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pliant remnant
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add the smoke effect as in the reference. it'll look good trust (already does look good :>)

sinful spear
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alright. as so as somebody who draws in a similar style, i can tell you a little something that can make your art pop off. so when characters have dark hair, color in the hair with a pencil. color in also, the black black of the clothes. shade the neck a bit and darken the line art. other then that, your drawing is pretty good!!

sinful spear
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and happy drawing!!

sinful spear
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yw!!

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hehe yeah just giving some feedback 😭

marsh acorn
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ye

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@marsh acorn

sinful spear
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in your situation i would immediately darken the line art especially around the eyes

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try to shade darker on some places of the hair

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yk?

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with the pencil

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give a little bit of a push

carmine lynx
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If its not too late for corrections, the ear is a little too low

sinful spear