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spark slate Aug 21, 2024, 9:00 AM

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Anything look weird

swift nest Aug 21, 2024, 9:25 AM

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The foreheads a bit uneven, to me the facial features sit a bit too high up in the face. The bangs going into his bun are very jagged. The irises appears to go over the eyes lineart and the highlights look a bit uneven. Ruoye clings to close to the neck, add a little space with additional lineart.

spark slate Aug 21, 2024, 9:33 AM

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This was my reference

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Is this any better?

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Ruoye is still kinda tight on his neck in the reference so idk

swift nest Aug 21, 2024, 9:46 AM

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layered them on top of eachother, the forehead of the original is much higher and the head proportions a bit larger.

spark slate Aug 21, 2024, 9:47 AM

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Ooh I see

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Ty

swift nest Aug 21, 2024, 9:48 AM

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as for rouye, it's just a recomendation to make it more lively

spark slate Aug 21, 2024, 9:48 AM

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I see

swift nest Aug 21, 2024, 9:49 AM

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How I drew rouye back a few years ago.

spark slate Aug 21, 2024, 9:49 AM

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I originally drew him more close to the reference, but I didn't know how to feel about it

spark slate Aug 21, 2024, 9:49 AM

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swift nest How I drew rouye back a few years ago.

Ooh

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Wait stop

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Your art is amazing

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And you are into tgcf

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This is too much

swift nest Aug 21, 2024, 9:51 AM

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Haha, thank you 🥰 yes I love mxtx's works

spark slate Aug 21, 2024, 9:51 AM

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Mxtx is a God 🤭

swift nest Aug 21, 2024, 9:52 AM

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spark slate Aug 21, 2024, 9:52 AM

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I CANT ITS TOO MUCH

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😭

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They're glorious

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Nah can I friend you

swift nest Aug 21, 2024, 9:54 AM

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Thank yooou 🤭 Yesss, ofcourse

spark slate Aug 21, 2024, 9:54 AM

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I drew this wip of nie huaisang yesterday

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It's a bit odd proportion wise

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I was kinda experimenting ig

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But how is it?

swift nest Aug 21, 2024, 9:56 AM

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Oh, it pretty good! Just the ear that needs some adjustment and the head that needs to shrink a bit

spark slate Aug 21, 2024, 9:57 AM

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swift nest Oh, it pretty good! Just the ear that needs some adjustment and the head that ne...

I see I see

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And while I'm here I might as well just drop these

swift nest Aug 21, 2024, 10:03 AM

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Niceee! 😍

gritty crow Aug 21, 2024, 10:22 AM

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I would help but I'm at a similar level in art

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Lol

gritty crow Aug 21, 2024, 10:24 AM

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swift nest Haha, thank you 🥰 yes I love mxtx's works

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spark slate Aug 21, 2024, 10:25 AM

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Can someone give critique on this

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I'm fixing old drawings of mine

gritty crow Aug 21, 2024, 10:25 AM

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The neck is too thin and shoulders are too sharp

spark slate Aug 21, 2024, 10:26 AM

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This is the og btw

spark slate Aug 21, 2024, 10:26 AM

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gritty crow The neck is too thin and shoulders are too sharp

Ooo I see

gritty crow Aug 21, 2024, 10:26 AM

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spark slate This is the og btw

Damm that's a huge difference

spark slate Aug 21, 2024, 10:27 AM

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Yeah lol haha

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That one was November 2023

swift nest Aug 21, 2024, 10:28 AM

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Adding my facial proportion guide. The neck is very skinny and the shoulders very sharp+ the collar bone a bit misplaced.

spark slate Aug 21, 2024, 10:33 AM

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Is this any better?

gritty crow Aug 21, 2024, 10:34 AM

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spark slate Is this any better?

It's definetly better

spark slate Aug 21, 2024, 10:34 AM

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Great :> thanks for the help

gritty crow Aug 21, 2024, 10:42 AM

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Btw this is a trapezius muscle, the shoulder is a bit below than that unlike a straight line, depending on how muscular they are this width can change. But for xianle look at the trapezius you can see it probably

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Okay I drew it a bit wrong, its more like this

spark slate Aug 21, 2024, 10:50 AM

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OH WAIT— I see what I did wrong

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Uh— can you critique this old ass drawing so I can fix it?

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Other than the obvious, skinny neck, weird eyes and shoulders

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Also how do you draw soup

spark slate Aug 21, 2024, 10:54 AM

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gritty crow Okay I drew it a bit wrong, its more like this

This was my ref

swift nest Aug 21, 2024, 10:55 AM

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spark slate Uh— can you critique this old ass drawing so I can fix it?

The most distracting is how she's holding the bowls two completely different ways. A better way would be hands in similar position, but one arm higher than the other.

spark slate Aug 21, 2024, 10:55 AM

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Yeah I thought the same thing lol

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To be fair I drew it like 9 months ago hahah

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In terms of folds for the clothes, do you know how it should look ?

gritty crow Aug 21, 2024, 10:58 AM

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spark slate This was my ref

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Yours is curving

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And the other is straight

swift nest Aug 21, 2024, 11:00 AM

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gritty crow

One is forward facing, the other 3/4

swift nest Aug 21, 2024, 11:04 AM

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spark slate In terms of folds for the clothes, do you know how it should look ?

Using human references in similar poses and clothing. Learning about fabric.

spark slate Aug 21, 2024, 11:05 AM

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Man idk how you find these references lol

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It's so hard for me

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I get the shittiest ones I swear

swift nest Aug 21, 2024, 11:06 AM

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im a master at finding references 😂

spark slate Aug 21, 2024, 11:25 AM

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It's not clean, but lemme know if there's more to fix

swift nest Aug 21, 2024, 11:36 AM

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the bone anatomy would look more like this

spark slate Aug 21, 2024, 11:42 AM

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Ooh I see

spark slate Aug 22, 2024, 11:22 AM

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Someone help me on this windmaster drawing pls

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This was ref

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Idk if this is better

swift nest Aug 22, 2024, 2:40 PM

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Lower the winking eye a tad, when winking,the lid sits about in the middle of an open eye, yours look level to the upper lid of the other eye.
The nose shadow looks a lot more like powerful philtrum shadow. Tilt the mouth a bit to the left.

gritty crow Aug 22, 2024, 4:52 PM

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spark slate This was ref

Make the left eye more left, the whole head is too skinny especially the jawline the bottom eyelid of left eye is different and rotate the nose to the right

spark slate Aug 23, 2024, 6:22 AM

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Ooh I see ty

spark slate Aug 23, 2024, 8:32 AM

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Does anything look off?

swift nest Aug 23, 2024, 8:40 AM

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spark slate

Overall, looks pretty good! I'd say the nose's a bit high.

spark slate Aug 23, 2024, 9:26 AM

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This?

spark slate Aug 23, 2024, 10:41 AM

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spark slate Aug 23, 2024, 11:19 AM

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dim wolf Aug 24, 2024, 9:27 AM

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I think the mapping on the head and hair is needed

spark slate Aug 24, 2024, 4:35 PM

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What do you mean by that?

dim wolf Aug 24, 2024, 6:51 PM

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Meaning when you draw people's heads you must know about the Heads guide guidelines and fundamentals

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like here you see the characters have different hairlines. The anime character you using has that too

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spark slate Aug 26, 2024, 8:16 AM

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swift nest Aug 26, 2024, 9:23 AM

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The head looks a bit large on this one in comparasion the body.
Not sure if hes meant to be tilting his head down a lot.
A key rule for eyes is to keep them the same size but angle the one further away a bit more in semi 3/4 perspective. I'd also lower the nose a smidge.

dim wolf Aug 26, 2024, 9:35 AM

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spark slate

That ears is to low

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This is the mapping the head guidelines

spark slate Aug 27, 2024, 1:23 PM

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swift nest Aug 27, 2024, 1:47 PM

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spark slate

Hey, looking pretty good! Just the eyes are a bit uneven sizewise and the ear should be a smidge longer.
Ears sit roughly between the bottom of the nose to the eyebrows, proportion wise.

spark slate Aug 27, 2024, 1:48 PM

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Ohhh I see

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I always get ears messed up lol

swift nest Aug 27, 2024, 1:55 PM

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spark slate I always get ears messed up lol

Haha, no worries, knowing these things without being informed is hard.
That's why somewhat porportionally correct construction sketches are important 😊

spark slate Aug 27, 2024, 1:55 PM

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Yeah

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Thanks for the advice!

dim wolf Aug 27, 2024, 10:10 PM

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There also different way to draw lips too

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When you draw Hair the head is divided into 3 section

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Depending what kind of style of hair and where the roots is coming from

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Also practice the end of hair sometimes they by 2 and 1

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2 will be thin and one will thick

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spark slate Aug 31, 2024, 8:53 AM

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A bit out of practice for trad

swift nest Aug 31, 2024, 9:09 AM

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spark slate

The nose is a bit far up, making the ear a bit short.

spark slate Aug 31, 2024, 11:49 AM

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Ohh I see

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I know the eyes are asymmetrical

swift nest Aug 31, 2024, 12:09 PM

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spark slate

I'd lower the nose a tad here too and the hairline is a bit too high. . Good thing you noticed the eyes, they are a bit assymetrical and also a bit too far appart! to me personally the neck feels a bit skinny and perhaps a smidge too long.

spark slate Sep 1, 2024, 8:31 AM

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This isn't a very recent drawing (about 2 months ago)

gritty crow Sep 1, 2024, 11:42 AM

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spark slate This isn't a very recent drawing (about 2 months ago)

Woah it looks so good

simple eagle Sep 1, 2024, 1:30 PM

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I opened this the instant I saw Xie Lian only to find more beautiful works inside and a geniune fan
Keep up your good work 🙌

spark slate Sep 1, 2024, 8:55 PM

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Thank you so muchhh

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I appreciate this

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You don't know how happy that makes me feel ☺️

simple eagle Sep 2, 2024, 2:19 AM

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Nah nah
I totally mean it
I read all the texts and saw how you're improving as time passes
I would totally like see you continuing to post on this thread

tall pier Sep 2, 2024, 2:48 AM

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swift nest How I drew rouye back a few years ago.

your art is amazing !🤩

swift nest Sep 2, 2024, 2:52 AM

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tall pier your art is amazing !🤩

oh, thank you kindly! 😊

spark slate Sep 9, 2024, 8:27 AM

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Can someone help with overall design lol

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Like colour, hairstyle, clothes

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Kinda at a loss

spark slate Sep 9, 2024, 8:28 AM

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simple eagle Nah nah I totally mean it I read all the texts and saw how you're improving as...

That is honestly so cool of u

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How do collars work lol

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This is what I have so far

gritty crow Sep 9, 2024, 12:36 PM

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Yo did you have a ref for this one?

simple eagle Sep 9, 2024, 3:54 PM

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spark slate How do collars work lol

I got a collar pic for you
See if it might help

spark slate Sep 10, 2024, 10:55 AM

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gritty crow Yo did you have a ref for this one?

Just winging it lol

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Was bored

spark slate Sep 10, 2024, 11:31 AM

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Uhh... does this look somewhat normal?

queen plume Sep 10, 2024, 11:54 AM

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have you flipped the canvas

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but chin looks a little sharp

gritty crow Sep 10, 2024, 12:10 PM

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spark slate Uhh... does this look somewhat normal?

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I think something about the head should be more like thsi

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So then you could make the eye go a bit higher and it look good

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'the right eye

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The centerline ain't centerlining

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Move the mouth more left to where the centerline should be

gritty crow Sep 10, 2024, 12:16 PM

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spark slate Uhh... does this look somewhat normal?

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So something like this

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The chin seems fine to me but meh, I ussually draw very sharp chins so idk

gritty crow Sep 10, 2024, 12:36 PM

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The next advice I'm about to say is optional, so if your trying to get that tgcf kinda artstyle your going to have to make your eyes smaller but wayy longer.

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I mean like the up and down should be small the right and left should be big. Uh does that even make sense?

spark slate Sep 12, 2024, 2:29 PM

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Yep totally!

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Trying out a different style with this drawing

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Kinda more danganronpa style

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Thanks for the anatomy tips

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I've been experiencing a major artblock these days and am struggling to finish or even start any drawings :/ Probably why you guys never see the improved versions of my art

gritty crow Sep 12, 2024, 3:26 PM

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spark slate I've been experiencing a major artblock these days and am struggling to finish o...

Take it easy, it's okay.

gritty crow Sep 12, 2024, 3:26 PM

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spark slate Thanks for the anatomy tips

Your welcome : )

spark slate Sep 14, 2024, 2:43 PM

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Of course there's no semblance of real lighting, other than that, how is it?