is it easy to feel the emotion in this piece?

[ocean bronze]

without knowing the context, i'd love to know if people would feel the emotion i tried to convey within this piece of mine named: an architect's reality

also, the piece is inspired by the music video to the song: writing on the wall

[weak bone]

Man I cant SEE the emotion, the piece is literally RADIATING it hehehehe!!

It's incredible!
I personally get the idea of insanity, desperation, nothing is working, whatever they try just isn't right. The idea is bigger than them, it's literally looming over them as they cross concept after concept.

The crumbling floor with the bright red underneath? Chefs kiss
It gives the impression they're running out of time or energy or simply nearing the edge

I mean there's many ways to interpret this, it's an amazing piece :D

Just asking, what if the shadow that's crossing the page is placed a but lower? It'd highlight the figure more and make the drawing more balanced by making the bottom "heavier"

[ocean bronze]

wah thank you so much!! 🫶🫶 this is EXACTLY the emotion i wanted to convey! i appreciate the time you put into this message!

[ocean bronze]

i definitely shouldve done this before merging all my layers 💔 this would've been such a good idea!! i see exactly how it could've improved the composition 😅 ill keep this in mind for future paintings! thank you so much! 💗

[weak bone]

Then hell yeah!! :D
It's no problem really, I mean it wasn't even hard B) the piece speaks for itself

[weak bone]

Aw man XD I know the feeling hehe
But the piece is still stunning don't get me wrong :)

[swift river]

its accurate as an architect student

good job

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