A little advice?

[visual cliff]

I feel like the char should be in darker shadow since the bg is already really bright for contrast yk?

[modern mesa]

That could work

Or yk I can lower the contract

Or contradt

Contrast gosh I cant type

[night salmon]

Definitely. I think the rim light should be bright. You could probably accentuate the rim lighting on her face as a focal point. Then make the shadows darker to make it pop. You could also try adding a vignette around the canvas to help bring in the focus of the character. I would also say the cloth covering her right hand doesn't communicate the form of her arm and armour as well as it should.
Although it still looks great! 🙂

[modern mesa]

Wdym communicate?

Oh and well

I use the cloth cuz I can’t draw the armor with that perspective

[night salmon]

I meant as in like it looks flat.