need help with Loomis

[woeful dove]

The Loomis method doesn't include the box

It includes just the circle that u used

The chin needs to be a little downwards that's why it looks weird

If it helps u then sure but I think the it's not aligned the correct way as the head

Like the upper back corner

U can also try using 3d posing models online/apps, I think it will help u greatly

The nose should be longer to the circumference

[woeful dove]

Here in my sketch u can see that the nose tip is at the circumference of the circle

Idk if that makes sense

I see that the tip of the ears and eyebrows are aligned at the same level

Which is nice good work

Also try imagining the circle as a sphere instead of like 2d

Mostly u just need to fix the nose and chin and then you'll be set

Look what you're doing wrong is you're taking the whole head as a cricle

Like even the front one isn't that correct tbh

Only the top of the head is curved bcuz of the skull and brain

Watch some tutorials on yt and just try to copy how they do it

Hope that helped 😄

[woeful dove]

U can also try imagining it as a box with a semicircle on top

[proud phoenix]

if youre inexperienced loomis method should be the last thing you learn in anatomy