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[mighty leaf]

pls help criticize this art piece
also that line in the middle of the chest is a guideline thanks!

[woeful scaffold]

the right thigh (right from my perspective) is alot bigger than the left

i just learned this and im not 100% sure if its right, but apparently the shoulders on feminine builds line up with the hips, also idk if its intentional but the arms are like to the side

[radiant summit]

Ohh this looks rly good!! It's not too bad but I would focus on building a good solid base or "skeleton" with simple shapes or lines for the shoulders and hips etc. I also would exaggerate the line of action a bit and this will help it seem more fluid and less stiff 😉 I drew some very simple lines with my finger (so it's not perfect but just to show the idea). Line of action is in green.

I'd be happy to draw some guides on my tablet that are more accurate if you feel like that would be helpful 😁

[mighty leaf]

thank you! the perspective is from an angle to the right of the body so the right thigh does seem a bit bigger, but if the perspective wasnt clear, do you know how i could change it so?

[mighty leaf]

if you could that would be greatly appreciated 🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️

[mighty leaf]

im not sure what i mean by the skeleton part.. could u explain a bit more? (thank u!!)

[radiant summit]

Of course!! I can try to do that for you tomorrow morning 😁 do you happen to have a reference you were using? If so, could you send it to me? That will help me give you the most accurate feedback :3

[mighty leaf]

ofc thank u sm for helping me!! 😭🫶

[mighty leaf]

hello! i unfortunately cannot find the same reference in my camera roll or pinterest (where i found it) :(( its okay if you want to draw from any standing reference, im sorry !! 🙇‍♂️😭

if it doesnt bother u can u also record it bc im having a problem with the process of drawing a body 😭