I feel like it's kind of missing something, idk. feel free to be harsh. also, they have blue eyes but I feel like it kind of doesn't fit so I also attached brown eyes!
#art critique n tips pls!
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wooden bay
Where is this green light coming from?
The regular light looks understandable but I can't tell the green light
late quartz
Maybe its the butterfly’s green
wooden bay
And also making the bangs more simplified and together would help
wooden bay
Maybe its the butterfly’s green
Probably not, it's reaching the left side of the hair too
late quartz
True, it doesn’t make sense the left
tidal inlet
this is kinda what I did, I don't rlly understand lighting much bc I don't rlly draw much
(the hair was originally with green highlights as in like dye but like green lighting idk)
will learn to do lighting properly later though 🫡
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And also making the bangs more simplified and together would help
ohhh ur right, I'll try that
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bangs?
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studied lighting a little!! will probably change the bg to match the lighting and possibly make the butterfly stand out more
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hmm I was trying to make her looking forwards (to the viewer) maybe I need to fix that
manic aurora
her head looks slightly tilted down
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yeah that's what I was going for
head tilted slightly down with eyes looking up kind of
