Rendering

[stable stratus]

Trying to get better at digital art (especially lighting) any tips or constructive criticism would be appreciated:))

[modern hearth]

The eyes are too distant, even for Asians, the nose looks like the nose of the living vacuum from teletubbies, the hair are subjective but I have similar hair and the back would NEVER be so still

Overall, good drawing

Try to give a solid and consistent structure to the nose and delete a mile or two to the distance between the eyes, and give a bit of depth to the shoulders

[stable stratus]

Thank you for being so honest it’s genuinely a big help
that nose comment honestly made me die of laughter but it’s so true 💀

[brave sonnet]

Other than what nowhereking said, id have more shadows on the face where the hair lands. Its too bright for a place where shadows would be cast. Id also incorporate the bg color into thr figure as a bounce light/shadow to tie it together

[modern hearth]

I'm a dumbass 24/7, If you need any other insul- I mean critiques just tell me

[icy ice]

Do you perhaps know badbadjudy?

[stable stratus]

No who’s that

[icy ice]

You art reminds me of them so much, they’re on TT so you can check them out!

[stable stratus]

I will tysm x

[stable stratus]

I have tried to do some of the advice given does it look better (minus the nose that is) @modern hearth @brave sonnet :))

[brave sonnet]

could use a bit more shadows under the nose/cupids bow

it kinda just ends but stylistically it looks fine

[upper wraith]

I would personally add a darker more saturated colour under the hair on the forehead! Since the hair is such a beautiful bright pink colour you could add some reflective light from it onto the face,
Have you ever seen/heard of the Asaro head? If not it’s a great thing to have a look at! Shows you the planes of the human face , working on that a bit can give your piece more depth

The eyes also seem flat, darkening the upper eyelid area could help this or show where the eyelids are, tad bit hard to identify them right now

[modern hearth]

👍just one thing, take a picture of your nose from the same perspective and look at the difference between yours and this...this thing

Oh and when you draw faces that are inclined try to position them perfectly vertically, you'll notice that the face's connoted are fucked up

[modern hearth]

I mean, if it's in your style I can't judge that thing that you call nose, but if you look at the left nostril you'll notice that is physically impossible for air to go through that hole that doesn't connect to the nasal bridge

[modern hearth]

I saw that

Cool👍

[stable stratus]

Sorry I forgot something wanted to re send it with it

[modern hearth]

Fuck, from 0 to 100 in a few days

Pardon sir, I disrespected you without any rights

[stable stratus]

Nah you were so helpful

[modern hearth]

The nose is perfect now, you've improved a lot I see

[stable stratus]

Thank youuuu x

[modern hearth]

Cool man, I like your style btw

[stable stratus]

Thank you x

[modern hearth]

Go on like this, you'll be a great artist

[modern hearth]

Np, see yah

[stable stratus]

Thank bye :))

[onyx summit]

work on autonomy and symmetry

flip the drawing as you work

[delicate zealot]

you should add more light to the eyes more, focus on where the lighting is basically

[stable stratus]

The head is supposed to be slightly tilted