#opinions on this sketch?

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hidden talon
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I tweaked it alot but then the pose still kinda feels awkward:3 can anyone help me point out where gone wrong and hwo to fix it?:3 there’s also a chili side profile there (if it helps(?) with what ideas I had for the pose too), thanks:D

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Time to do smthing freaky when nobody’s around 👽‼️

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L/I/N/K//I/N//B/I/O (there’s no link in bio don’t check)

hazy tide
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I mean the pose is straight so it feel stiff

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Try like

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Idk make some posture/gesture

hidden talon
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🙀 oh

wicked grove
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Incorporate different hand poses

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Instead of making the hand straight you could angle it

spring orbit
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He seems pretty tense despite his relaxed face and kind of like he's shrugging. You could try to widen out the shoulders and lower them a bit. Your problem might be that his head is bigger than his body aswell, but doing the things I suggested above should fix that. but again that could be art style. Personally I don't really see any BIG problems here.

The hand is pretty big and straight, you could look at a hand in that position, or your own, and add some of the creases

hidden talon