#i need some help with improving

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fluid rain
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It's actually quite good, I told you for learn shading and gradation,And maybe trim the lineart to make it thinner or even non-existent by making the background darker. Don't forget to pay attention and look for weaknesses in your art

oak moon
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Honest looks great man, like silk said just learn shading and tone, but the most important question is

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DO IT JIGGLE

glad wolf
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thanks!!

glad wolf
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😭

glad wolf
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guys

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can u rate this?

modest raptor
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why did you delete it 😭

glad wolf
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idk

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do u want to rate it?

modest raptor
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yes

glad wolf
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im a beginner

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can u tell me what i can improve

glad wolf
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should i send inspo?

modest raptor
# glad wolf

this looks good but the shadows dont really have a fur texture yknow?

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sure you can

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specifically around the chin

oak moon
# glad wolf

BAWHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAH he looks so goofy, fr tho great art, just lackking some shadow ig

modest raptor
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omg i just noticed the brows

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i love it 😭

oak moon
modest raptor
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you should give him a thin little moustache lol

glad wolf
glad wolf
modest raptor
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is that the inspo?

glad wolf
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yup

modest raptor
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thats cool

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it looks identical, the only thing is the mose and eyes

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noce

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nose

glad wolf
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thanks!!

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i have to improve the nose kinda

modest raptor
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yea, i think your main priority should be line work though. it looks good, i didnt even notice until now, but some of your lines dont connect and theyre a bit wobbly

glad wolf
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idrk how to fix that

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my hands are shaky so yea

modest raptor
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me too lol. i get migrains and they make me have really shaky hands, which sucks

glad wolf
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btw i used stabiliser

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and they are still wobbly

modest raptor
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do you use quick lines?

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moving quickly makes less wobbles

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and if you move slow using a stabliser itll think the bumps are intentional

glad wolf
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ohh! thanks

glad wolf