critique

[lone igloo]

Good start. Here are some things i noticed when redlining:

1. The left eye is too high up.
2. The ears are too high up. Ears in front facing perspective will always start at the eyes and end at the nose
3. The left side of the face is too wide compared to the right side
4. The neck is too wide (but knowing its dbz i wouldnt be surprised thats just the style)

I rec you do a 2nd sketch/refined sketch to fix any errors you had in the 1st sketch. This is done so why go over the first sketch with a kneadable erader or a regular eraser but pressing lightly

[deft pasture]

hello! I think the art itself is pretty well done, but for the shading, try blending the colours a bit more, and make sure the proportions are more accurate!🙂 also for the neck, try to make it straighter since when i ( or when i see other artists do it.) draw the neck for anime, you either see is curved inwards or straight:)

[keen steeple]

Tails always with great explanations☺

[lone igloo]

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