criticism

[half zenith]

Smthn feels off tell me what i can fix

[storm flame]

the head maybe

its big

[vital steeple]

You have barely any shadows so everything visually is around the same saturation.

[storm flame]

you could also put some shadow ehe its too bright

[hardy wadi]

You should add more shadow, but when you render them, don’t make the shadows have a muddied colour to it. I’ll show you more appropriate pallets, and differences between them.

Not going around the wheel and just desaturating the colour makes it look unvibrant if you are going towards a positive art piece.

As I progress to the right is start using different varieties of colours. For the fourth and fifth pallet I used both the wheel and darkening of hue.

[radiant garden]

@half zenith
drawing eye from 1/3 is dificult, the white part of the eye was going into the void of the abys, if the eye cuts off like this in the part of the face make sure you draw it conencting

mainly what i adjusted here was the face porportions

less wide lips so theres some pespective on them by moving them to the left

lowerred the eyes so she doesnt have a horse like face

and added a bit of shadow next to the nose to make it stand out a bit

here is the non shadow version

face proportions and distances between things is very important, be careful with it, if you dont do it right it will feel weird