tips and critique

[tacit gyro]

any tips and critique highly appreciated!🙏

[tacit gyro]

Imma just wait till tomorow

[dire axle]

The mouth is tilted

[tacit gyro]

its suppose to be like a tilted frown

[deft frigate]

i think you should darken the lines for the Adams apple and collarbone a bit because it reminds me of the cloth folds 💀💀💀

[dire axle]

All the same, a mouth still needs to be properly aligned with the face

[tacit gyro]

Ah I see alr, Tysm for the critque highly appreciate it

[deft frigate]

I assume it's a WIP either way, it's good enough I don't see anything particularly wrong, just being nitpicky

[deft frigate]

also the mouth should be a little higher