I CANT FIGURE OUT WHATS WRONG

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i think the nose looks off bc its in the wrong perspective

camera is above so u shouldnt be able to see nostrils

i think

as for the focal point, the lightest part of the drawing will determine that, so I recommend making his face a shade or few darker than the explosion or something?

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Ooo will do these changes and post an after with these adjustments, thank you so much!!!

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i suggest looking at a reference for the face

and makijg it a few steps darkewr still

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Alr will do and try to find good references, thanks again