Would love some critique

[minor palm]

Here I have the same drawing, one sketched, and the other colored. Give me everything y’all got, I want to improve 😁

[placid hemlock]

Hi there, I’m not here to critique but I could help you via vc?

[ivory mason]

Hey, I love your style and really all I would say is make sure the body is proportioned as in because it looks out of place- that's it tho ❤️

[minor palm]

Sorry, can’t do that. I don’t really do vcs

[minor palm]

Alright, thanks!