fixing the pose before rendering out the lighting, what other changes should I make? Here I shifted the knee closer to the chest, not sure if the final result looks better.
#pose help
heavy sigil
heavy sigil
Wait the one that’s crossed over?
autumn depot
Their right
autumn depot
Thank you
heavy sigil
Thank you
I redrew parts and liquified more, does this look more natural?
sorry for the delay btw 😅
autumn depot
Looks the same…. But it doesn’t look bad still
heavy sigil
Looks the same…. But it doesn’t look bad still
hang on lemme circle the area I changed the shoelace on the shoe with foreshortening
autumn depot
Nooo that was the exact opposite of what it needed 😅
Because the boot looks like it is going to the right
And the laces are going the opposite direction
autumn depot
Just a tad
heavy sigil
on it
tulip temple
hey! looks good. here are some things id change:
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the top of the head is a bit flat. it could use more volume
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under the chin could have the shadows be darker to further separate the neck from the head. additionally the neck is too curved, it can be straighten out
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the rightside of the purple collar could use more form.
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the pinky/palm can use more mass. its too skinny rn
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the left side of the shirt can be pushed inwards. its a little too wide on that side
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the leg thats over the other leg's is missing a chunk of the butt/upper thigh
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the laces should have an upwards angle from the perspective its in
this is a further nitpick but the shirt's wrinkles can show the form of the torso more. you cant really tell he slouching/sitting against the chair or keeping his ribcage up and off the chair