is there too much going on?

[wise jay]

Im just wondering if everything (the hair and the body) are separated properly

[fierce arch]

Only thing that seems to be bugging me is: does she have two left arms?

[eternal bridge]

the hair can be split less evenly for more interest. its split p 50/50 rn when it can be 60/30 then the torso can be read more clearly

[wise jay]

No, it's based off of this reference!

[fierce arch]

This is the reason i ask, sorry i shoulda circled it to begin with 😅

[ashen dove]

If you want the hair to be the star of the show then I suggest omit the right hand( the one between the hair) by drawing the hair over it. You can also simplify the shoes a bit to highlight the hair more. Otherwise if you want her outfit to be the focus then you can use a more simple hairstyle. Love the way you do line art btw 🫶

[wise jay]

Ohh the blue part's supposed to be a hoodie! I'll make it more clear in final!

[wise jay]

Ty

[wise jay]

So should I make it so that the torso shows more and remove the hair covering it? 🤔

Or part of it

Btw (I should've mentioned this earlier) I'm drawing fanart of this custom doll that's a redesign of Lagoona Blue from the series Monster High

[wise jay]

There weren't any references for the back so I had to improvise a little 🙃

[eternal bridge]

rlly shotty but this is what what i meant by 60/30

makes more room to see the torso better

[wise jay]

TYSM!!