i saw your text in all chat, and i want to say noones helping you probably because you dont need help :D! it looks great just keep going as you are imo!!
#Please! Help me, something is bothering me.
vernal jewel
warped saffron
I am LOOKING rn
lilac coral
Continue with the sketch and fix as you go ^^ doesn’t need much help
misty palm
Omg hi
warped saffron
The nose is too high!!!!
misty palm
Okay
vernal jewel
especially since it an unfinished copy there isnt anything that needs critiquing, its looking really nice so far
misty palm
Btw
warped saffron
especially since it an unfinished copy there isnt anything that needs critiquing...
For real
misty palm
Dont u guys think the eyes are to close
boreal totem
The nose is too high!!!!
And a bit too small too
vernal jewel
Dont u guys think the eyes are to close
i dont think so, i think the scar placement is making it seem that way
misty palm
Okay
vernal jewel
but i might be seeing wrong
vernal jewel
But it isnt noticable
exactly!!
warped saffron
My eyes aren't this precise bro 😭 idkk
misty palm
i dont think so, i think the scar placement is making it seem that way
Oh, maybe the scar is too big
vernal jewel
Oh, maybe the scar is too big
could be, its also a little more to the left in the original compared to your copy
misty palm
Okay
vernal jewel
but again dont trust my eyes
vernal jewel
sameee
warped saffron
🔥
warped saffron
You can see the curvature of the head reflected onto the face
Looks really clean
Do you have white ink? Just curious.
misty palm
what materials did you use wow
Black thin marker for lineart and aquarella
and if i want to fix it
i use tipp-ex
It literally is the same color of the paper so u cant see it
misty palm
Lol
misty palm
I see where the paper is slightly dented tho lol
Its that
vernal jewel
Black thin marker for lineart and aquarella
wow that makes it more impressive
i despise aquarelle
sob
misty palm
I see where the paper is slightly dented tho lol
but I will put it in a frame so it won't be
warped saffron
but I will put it in a frame so it won't be
Sounds good 💯🔥
Looking great man keep it goin
misty palm
I fixed some botherings
Yalllll
I finished the sketch!!
Fixed the right eye cuz it looked awkward
Help i feel that i evolved a lot as an artist 😭
Let me find an old drawing
misty palm
bump
reef sonnet
Fixed the right eye cuz it looked awkward
just a few nitpicks, i think you should finish the rest of the jaw and even continue it a lil more with the clothes. I get the reference finishes at that point but you really limit yourself in learning if you dont try to complete it like a puzzle. I also think you should make the lashes a bit thicker and like how it is in the reference
also you should really ink this
reef sonnet
like you did here i think this looks great
shell fiber
id say theres a couple things you can start implementing in your art in the future
- start drawing both eyes at the same time, itll help keep it symmetrical and stay the same size
- draw out the basic guidelines of the face
- think of the hair as in ribbons to have more form to it. its kinda flat rn
misty palm
Hi
shell fiber
hello
misty palm
Are u talking about the skecth ?
misty palm
id say theres a couple things you can start implementing in your art in the futu...
Wdym as in ribbons
shell fiber
Wdym as in ribbons
i think its shown best with the back of the bun. but the hair has form of its own and asian hair (anime) grows kinda flat
so they act a bit like ribbons. if you bend a ribbon youll see the front and the underside. the same as hair. as it moves from wind, hands, etc youll see the front/back of the hair
shell fiber
What should i fix from the lower part
what im talking about shown in the ref u used. its there but not in ur drawing. the lower part looks fine. id give more detail to the collar to be more 3d (i.e. adding the rim of the collar
misty palm
I still cant do that
I have to do it with the white market
marker*
Full finished
@shell fiber
shell fiber
I have to do it with the white market
i see. youre planning on coloring it too