critique pls

[sweet bough]

I haven't drawn on paper in a while pls help

[versed nimbus]

the head can be centered on the neck more. the arm and hand is way too small, even if youre going for a more moe style. also this might be a nitpick but also draw the upper arm. the floating arm kinda just is. doesnt feel like its hers

[sweet bough]

Is that better?

[rotund idol]

the hand could be a little bigger
cute character btw is that your oc?

[versed nimbus]

Yeah

[whole epoch]

I would reposition the shoulder a tiny bit just to make it a bit more coherent with the pose

[sweet bough]

I did the lineart already 😭 (this is why I do digital)

[sweet bough]

Sort of an oc, they don't have a name or anything I just drew some stuff. Idk if it's even a good oc design tbh

[whole epoch]

Don’t worry it was just a nitpicky critique. Good job on it!

[rotund idol]

I think it has the potential to! She looks a bit like a vocaloid lol

[vestal tendon]

Ink it!!!!

It looks dead

if u ink it u will be able to highlight it

I love it

[sweet bough]

I colored it

Critique pls I haven't done traditional in a while and it sucks 😭

[vestal tendon]

HELP I DIDNT EXPECT THIS

I LOVE HOW U COLORED IT

IT LOOKS LIKE DIGITAL BUT IN A PAPER

[sweet bough]

Tyy I used alcohol markers mainly :D

[vestal tendon]

Npp

What brand btw?

And whats ur paper gm?

Im doing this rn

[sweet bough]

Ohuhu markers and copic skin markers

[vestal tendon]

too expensive for me 😦

[sweet bough]

There's like small packs of ohuhus that aren't too expensive

[vestal tendon]

$$$?

[sweet bough]

There's also another kind of marker that can't blend but it's like 5 dollars I think for 256 markers

Wait I'll check the prices of smaller packs

[vestal tendon]

WHAT-

256 for 5$?

But the fact that they cant blend is..

[sweet bough]

1 dollar is around 55 pesos btw

[sweet bough]

Wait I have an example of what it looks like

[vestal tendon]

I use €

[sweet bough]

Pls ignore the drawing being rlly ugly I didn't do a sketch and went straight to ballpen

[vestal tendon]

Omg temu is shit

[vestal tendon]

Good coloring

[sweet bough]

U just layer them messily

1 euro is like 63 pesos

[vestal tendon]

Why are u talking me about pesos