And any other ideas I could have worked on?
#Critique/help/ideas for this composition
toxic hawk
agile ruin
the composition is fine. its the color composition that isnt? pink is just light red so it draws the eye more and in ur work the pikn is all on one side so thats where i look only
i kinda just naturally ignore the blue
toxic hawk
the composition is fine. its the color composition that isnt? pink is just light...
I got some critique on the composition already saying (as I had already predicted) that the second part is basically unreadable/ they don't know what's happening there. I think that was really accurate.
I did put the less relevant parts blue and the interesting portions pink, I thought it was okay, so where would you say I should swamp the scale? One thing I see now is there is quite a lot of pink on the bottom left corner...