Give me all the constructive criticism as you want so I can improve this drawing

[visual cave]

practice art a lot more and learn anatomy. Idk if its meant to be a stick figure style but yeah. Also add more color along with shading and details.

bro is typing up a storm

[mild bough]

I would break the body down into shapes so it's easier to get more accurate anatomy. the line art on the body is a bit shaky too at some parts so it would also benefit trying to get more confident with the lines

[mild bough]

😭

[mild bough]

and breaking down the body can also help keep the proportions more consistent when you draw the character again

[remote kraken]

Actually really love this simple wacky style. It reminds me of your favorite Martian and papa’s bakeria. It would look much better with line consistency so turn on the stabilizer.

[swift monolith]

Thank you Yom Ama, that was actually what i was going for

[swift monolith]

Thank you for the feed back! I'm using this to make a base for Ark V2 as we speak

[swift monolith]

also, i don't think i mentioned this but i was going for that late 2000's newgrounds style

[swift monolith]

GHASP MY FIRST BIT OF FANART! AND ITS AMAZING TO BOOT!

[deep sail]

Yw! I did it for fun

[deep sail]

💚

[swift monolith]

When i start making Ark V3 I WILL be using this as reference

[deep sail]

I'm also making Ur pfp-

[deep sail]

For funzies 😊

[swift monolith]

https://tenor.com/view/puss-in-boots-cat-cute-kitty-begging-gif-14848029646905247904

When ur done with that can i use it

BEHOLD ARK V2! THE 2D DEMON!

BARAGE ME WITH CRITICISM

[deep sail]

His thumb is on the wrong side on the right hand😭

[swift monolith]

CRAP! Thank you for telling me (god i'm so stupid)

[deep sail]

Nah it's okay everyone makes mistakes

[swift monolith]

Also don't you mean left hand?

[deep sail]

No the right one

From the viewers perspective

[swift monolith]

ah

im being stupid again

[deep sail]

Summons fanart:

I was tired

Pls don't hurt me

😭😭🙏🙏🙏

[swift monolith]

AHHHH ITS SO GOOD! i feel so inferior 🥲

[deep sail]

Nuh uh

[deep sail]

I can do better

If I have referance

With reference

[swift monolith]

Can we get in a call so you can give me tips and talk art overall

[deep sail]

Hmmmm

[deep sail]

Sometime this week

👍

[swift monolith]

maybe tomorrow?

[deep sail]

Or I can give tips here

Cuz I'm shy 😭

Cya later Chaotic mild chilli cheese fries

He enjoys your chaoticness

🤫🧀

[swift monolith]

YO, NEW ARK VERSION DROPED. now you may tear it to pieces and tell me things i can improve on

[deep sail]

Waowza

[deep sail]

saves image

S.p.e.a.k

[swift monolith]

OMG thank you, i did not think it was THAT good

[deep sail]

🤤 eats art

[swift monolith]

huh ._.

[deep sail]

🤫🤫🤫

[swift monolith]

so, anything i can improve?

[deep sail]

First is the head to body ratio

Head is a bit big

Secondly the body is a bit zoinkers

And where are the hands? I see lil pellets

You made me say thoae

Those*

You have been talking for a bit

[swift monolith]

I'm going for a stylized look so thats why the hands look like that

[deep sail]

Orkay

The clouds are red and blue

[swift monolith]

yeah the body is a bit weird

[deep sail]

I can draw some body types is u need

But they will end up pretty goofy

N0 l1es

[swift monolith]

yes please

[deep sail]

0ki d0k1

👍

I send them in DMS tmmr

💚😊🤫💥

[deep sail]

Also his back is bending the wrong way

Should be bent like this

My art depends on what mood I'm in

[deep sail]

Hey there buttercups 🧔‍♂️

Jk

[swift monolith]

sup

[swift monolith]

can we be friends

[deep sail]

Sure

[swift monolith]

https://tenor.com/view/yippee-happy-yippee-creature-yippee-meme-yippee-gif-gif-1489386840712152603