#which one is better
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I think that you should bring the shadow much closer but on the right side
Also if you don’t mind, I have an anatomy tip
I went through and edited some of the changes that you can use for reference if you’d like
So here’s yours that you sent
And there’s the edited version
So by bringing the shoulder down, it creates a more natural feeling, and I’m sure you noticed the proportions on the face changed, along with the hair
Now they are both symmetrical
I brought the mouth further over to the left as well to line up with the cheek bone, and pulled her left eye slightly down, along with that cheek
I also edited the shadow on the necklace of course
I also cropped a bit off the bottom
Thanks but honesty i didn't wanted critique on other parts
I feel like you made the shoulder to broad in this edit
The OG looked fine
i think the first one works best since it follows the light source, but the shadow for the necklace itself should be softer since its not directly on top of the body
2 but only because it uses more shadows, the light has a dulling affect on the face and hair.