What should i improve on?

[balmy yarrow]

Ive started doing digital art 2 months ago and I’ve been enjoying it! I want tips on areas I can improve on so that I can hopefully develop my own style in the future

[timber siren]

buff out the clothing on the shoulders, makes her look like she's a bit more comfortable in her clothes.

and the hair on the right should not have the same light value as the left unless there's a second light source.

you have done the hair pretty nice, could add some more defining features to it but I can't place my finger on what tbh.

got it, the bangs go a bit far back imo. try something like this.

[austere tundra]

Wanted to add on to what has already been said, exaggerate it go crazy with the blood if it’s your thing. Create some deep contrasting shadows and really show emotion in the eyes

[timber siren]

haha who's awesome now 💪💪

[balmy yarrow]

Hb the skin

I had to redo that many times snd even now im still not sure if it looks right

[timber siren]

it looks nice, but if u want to improve it, try implementing some more defining planes to it.

give me 5 mins and I'll find u an image.

[balmy yarrow]

Alr take your time pookie bear

[timber siren]

here u go bubs.

[balmy yarrow]

Ahh so a bit darker on the eye area

[timber siren]

not just that, use a slightly more slanted brush stroke on each plane.

[balmy yarrow]

To match the form right

[timber siren]

I can try and go over there with a sketchbook app on my phone but I'm not a digital artist so u gotta bare with me.

lemme finish me set first one sec.

[balmy yarrow]

Alr alr

[timber siren]

leg day :/

[balmy yarrow]

I just started digital like 2 months ago

[timber siren]

ahh OK not bad at all for 2 months work.

[balmy yarrow]

Im more ised to trad

[timber siren]

with that I'd have assumed at lead 6 months.

[balmy yarrow]

Im more used to hatching so color values are still new to me

[timber siren]

there some amazing results u could get woth hatching ngl.

[balmy yarrow]

Ikr

[timber siren]

I've seen artists hatch their entire work then blend the edges of the face Plains for example and it looks spectacular.

[balmy yarrow]

Idk how to incorporate it with digital tho

[timber siren]

gives off a spiderman into the spider verse type feel to it.

[timber siren]

ehh I doubt it would be a big learning curve.

[balmy yarrow]

I probably just need more time experimenting with colors

[timber siren]

hey I was finna do this for u but I remembered I'm ass at digital art.

take that image of the face planes, and paint over it committing to the light values and see the result you get compared to what you got so far, not guaranteed to help but if it does it'll prolly be valueable.