Critique my Map.

[vital quest]

I don't know something looks off but i can't put an idea on what it is.

[drifting brook]

Theres no bodies of water? Other than rivers. Feels too puzzle-piece-y

[vital quest]

Thank you for the Critique, any other flaws you see? I really need to improve the Map Art

[empty flume]

Try looking at the coasts of the UK, or the islands of Greece. If these are supposed to be country sized chunks of land the edges are far too clean, that doesn't happen.

if these are cities and rivers, then the water flow is even almost all the way through, there's no thin spots and I only see one area where the water flow would pull towards to

[vital quest]

Oh no they're just one whole island, think of like the Land of OOO.

[vital quest]

Noted.

Thank you for the Critique

[lavish solstice]

improving on sinn's find, you could add a water bed beneath the land that connects to that lake at the bottom right, providing the maps water.

[vital quest]

Even as in too perfect?

[lavish solstice]

aka how wells are built but on a much, much bigger scale.

[vital quest]

Noted

[empty flume]

even in thickness

[vital quest]

Right, yeah i see it now it looks too...artificial if that's the word

[vital quest]

A Water Bed is what again sorry i only know Rivers and Ponds

[lavish solstice]

watered was likely the wrong word, imagine a lake beneath ground.

[vital quest]

So like an underwater cave?

[lavish solstice]

basically yes.

could be a cool extent ion to the explorable map too.

[vital quest]

Oh this game doesn't have that feature, it's only a flat surface.

If only it did have caves that would be fun

[lavish solstice]

ohh OK.

I mean you could have an u derwater lvl that it teleport you to.

[torn flare]

Reminds me of minecraft, and I notice around the edges of rivers it’s very sharp. You can smooth this out and make it more jagged someone probably already said something like this

[lavish solstice]

yo how did u get the champion tag?

[vital quest]

Yeah I just liked doodled the rivers without a single thought.

[torn flare]

By being amazing 😋

I actually don’t know why I got it

[lavish solstice]

I don't doubt that lol

awww....

[vital quest]

It's a God Simulator Sandbox game

It's pretty fun

[torn flare]

That sounds cool!

[vital quest]

You can have People in it too

These Titles on the Biomes I'd say

Are actually Civilizations of People who all hate eachother.

Alright back to the topic any other flaws you guys see?

[torn flare]

I’ve got a question about Ichinoda, what is the round green thing it’s ontop of? Is it a tree?

[lavish solstice]

Ohhhhhh that's why it looks similar!

I've played this game before.

which ones Ur favourite civilisation so far? lol.

[vital quest]

Earthquake generated Mountain i was lazy on making Mountains

[vital quest]

None i will drop a Nuke and all the Plagues and Infestations when only one Civilization is left

[lavish solstice]

haha

[vital quest]

Yeah I'm starting to see all the sloppy things about this Map of mine...

[lavish solstice]

welcome to the art world.

[vital quest]

Please point out more flaws

[lavish solstice]

I mean, rivers wouldn't really change course unless there's something truly difficult to dismantle for example rocks, so the island in the middle... shouldn't exist.

and if there's a split from 1 river into two, one of the sides should be rapidly dying, since the water would take the easiest route.

there's a whole lot of river science you could nerd out on, glad I learnt how rivers work instead of paying taxes at school 😀👍

[vital quest]

I see i see noted