any and all crit (again)

[vast fractal]

this is literally perfect, i cant help with the smoke unfortunately but maybe the shoulder needs to be a tad lower if you want it to look more like the reference?

[tawny nimbus]

The only thing I can see when playing “spot the difference” is that the references cheek bone has a slightly higher highlight that rides up right under the eye, as for color warm up your midtone a bit her skin is very rich and I think it would start to match better that way, for smoke id say use a brush that has a hard and soft edge and have the opacity change with pressure, be sure to use a sorta light blue grey for the smoke I think, she looks so good so far!!!! And omg the ref is so pretty, where'd u find it?

[wary nova]

Very nice!!

[keen moon]

thank you!

[keen moon]

i'm not sure krita has that kind of brush but i'll try if i can find it, thank you! and just i found it on pinterest

[keen moon]

you're right thank you i didn't even notice that

[keen moon]

here is the finished piece