working on this , if you got any tips and this I can fix tell me

[hollow narwhal]

I’ll be updating progress pics along the way

ALSO I NEED HELP WITH LIPS

[tired thistle]

Cool

[dire river]

I mean you just need to work on it more add more detail

[junior mural]

Idk if its just me but the shoulder/arm seems a bit disconnected from the joint?

Maybe the rendering or positioning

[hollow narwhal]

The one on the chest right?

[junior mural]

No the one that's in full view

[hollow narwhal]

Ohh ok

I see what you mean

Yes I’ll move it in a bit

[hollow narwhal]

What should do with the backround

[jade depot]

Hello there, I'm still learning too, so I'm just sharing some thoughts. Take this with many grains of salt. I just want to say your art looks really nice!

i would say having the arm shorter and moved to the right could be better

also i feel like the proportions between the body and the boobs feel too disassociated, like the boobs big while body is muscular and have less body fat

another thing i noticed is that her left leg seems too small and long compared to the right leg

as for the background, i really like the dragon

maybe having the dragons head showing could spice up the art

and for the lips, i have no clue i struggle with it a lot too lmao

yours already look perfect to me

[hollow narwhal]

Thank you the anatomy issues I noticed today while staring at my picture in class

The dragon showing head is a really good idea

[hollow narwhal]

I also decided the mood is a bit too bright for my liking so imma change the base backround color to something darker and add more contrast to make the highlights less common and more powerful

Or maybe it’s not too bright

Idk

Hard choice

Gotta think about it

[hollow narwhal]

I just got a really good idea for the back round including what you told me

One sec so i can show you something

So you see this dragon

Or snake

Oh it’s a snake

But either way

The thing on its upper back

Imma add to the dragon

Her hand is emtpy so I can draw it as if she is holding onto one of the spikes

And that type stuff

Or

Eh

Nvm

I want the dragon back hair so that won’t work

Ignore all that spouting

[hollow narwhal]

Wiat the way you’d do the dragon was perfect really it follows that one rule really good

Thanks

[hollow narwhal]

Gotta fix the clouds

Her lips are also different cause I had to redo them

The stupid file got corrupted

😠

[hollow narwhal]

I decided on a lighting position change

[jade depot]

yooo that looks sick already

[hollow narwhal]

Thanks sire

[hollow narwhal]

@indigo spade 3 edits on photoshop phone I personally think the 1st pic I sent looks better

Ugh idk

The choice is so hard

[indigo spade]

1st one for me

[hollow narwhal]

Yes I think I might just go for that

Kewe

Is there a way

To edit the black and whites like on photo thou

[indigo spade]

probably a tone curve?

im not sure about on a phone

[hollow narwhal]

Ok I’ll look at that

[hollow narwhal]

Kewe how to apply the correction layer to everything

Or am I gonna have to make it like 100 times and merge it

[indigo spade]

Erm

Im only seeing that you have to do it to every layer 🤔

[hollow narwhal]

Yea

😞

Gonna take me a minute

[hollow narwhal]

Here it is

Plus look at the nose

Soon in

Zoom

The detail I out

😁

The nose game out so nice

Rn I’m doing the eyes

[indigo spade]

You do be cooking 🔥

[hollow narwhal]

Imma do a bit of the hair

I’m scary

[indigo spade]

scary

[hollow narwhal]

The face used to be so ugly

She got a glam up

I’m so Inloce with the bose

[indigo spade]

Yeah def looks better now

[hollow narwhal]

Trying out hair

[hollow narwhal]

Tomorrow I’ll work on her pants more and the dragons face

[indigo spade]

progress check 🔥

[inland tiger]

it looks great but I think there's not enough contrast between the bg and the characters

[hollow narwhal]

Well there isn’t much backround yet but I’ll create more contest between the charcter and the dragon if that’s what you mean

I still need to work on the dragon 🐉

It’s only on sketch mode

[hollow narwhal]

I reached a same point as the last drawing where I need to study more so I shall do that, I need to study efficiency and landscapes and backroonds then when I feel the time is right I’ll again try to draw her (also change her design a bit too)

Im gonna official call her my progress check oc

lol