Does it look OKAY

[toxic stream]

I feel like artists sometimes can't tell if their art is good or not so i just wanna know what you think of this tiny thing in my sketchbook.
Any thoughts or tips about this are very welcome, thanks in advance:))

[remote salmon]

This is absolutely amazing , it's just kinda weird how I can't see her neck

Just as if the hair is wrapping around it

[toxic stream]

thank you so much!! yeaa I see it too now...I think I just kind of fixed the neck, bc in the reference it was all in shadow and i didn't really know how to paint it

[austere mica]

U can imply it with a rlly dark yellow/orange/reddish tone

Art sometimes isnt about accuracy but readability

[toxic stream]

yess true!! thank you, that really helped!!