im looking for complete criticism here but i want to know what I should practice next to make this look better
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brazen geyser
slow hearth
idk why but her right eye looks too slanted. and her torso looks a little off to me
vale cloak
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You should practise this pose more. The body is a little bit short (it's not a big error), the arms is not long enough. Next is practise about form (the cylinder), because the belt is not tied to the body
And for the face, a vital thing in the face is the eye, they should be same about size, shape (except in the special angle) and the iris location, and the eyebrow is a too short
And practise line drawing too, I think you did this drawing using a vector sofware like Adobe Illustrator with mouse. In that case, you can try pentool instead of brush tool
Another one is the collar, I think this is a kimono (or a costume inspired by kimono or sinosphere clothes). Kimono has a rule that the collar must have a right "Y" shape (the left collar must be above the right), if it a flipped Y, it's the collar for dead people
brazen geyser
(I edited your drawing)
You should practise this pose more. The body is a littl...
i use pro create on a ipad and these are the ref i used, i know the eye seems confusing but this dude makes it look good
what can i do to improve line art
vale cloak
what can i do to improve line art
Practise until you have long and steady lines. And notice where to use bold lines and thin lines
brazen geyser
Practise until you have long and steady lines. And notice where to use bold line...
when do you use bold lines