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tardy stag
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That looks amazing, though I believe you should add dimension to the blue part of the fence (I believe that’s a fence) and also distinguish the clouds in the background from the sky since the clouds near the lighter blue to yellow blend a bit into there. I suggest darkening your cloud’s shadows since your lighting and use of color theory seems perfect there.

I also suggest darkening your shadows on the golden and red tops of the (pillars is the only work I can think of right now 😭) and maybe using the smallest bit of white for your shine. You can also look up tutorials on how to draw gold if gold is what you’re trying to achieve.

For the two beige silhouettes above, again— darken your shadows a bit for greater depth near the outsides of the silhouettes.

Other than that, the artwork looks awesome and it’s so creative!

agile vine
# tardy stag That looks amazing, though I believe you should add dimension to the blue part o...

Oh I didn’t even notice the blue fence yet, ty!! Yeah, the clouds need a lot of work I’m not sure yet how to tackle them. 😅 I’ll darken the pillars that’d be good, ty!! Hmm for them I was going for a cartoonish yellow more than gold but I think I could try out the gold too. 🤔 And will darken the silhouette shadows!! Seems I need overall a lot more contrast haha.
Thank you soo o much for your feedback!!! Helps a lot 🙏EM_pray ArtClubHeart I’ll post progress photo with those edits soon as I can get to it! :D tyy ArtClubHeart

tardy stag
agile vine
tardy stag
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Unfortunately idk what those brushes would be since I do not have procreate 😔

agile vine
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Heres a nice tutorial on drawing clouds
https://youtu.be/D10SaeX6LfQ?si=o30gG78eFlrCwf7c

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