Can i have some critique?

[weak hemlock]

i nneed some feedbacks to fix this art if theres smth qrong here, any help would be appreciated

hopefully it doesnt looked too messy🗿

[void oasis]

It looks rly good but tbh it's so busy it's kind of hard for me to gauge if anything is off 😭 it will be super cool once it's colored!!

It probably will look more clear once u put some base colors down too :))

[weak hemlock]

alright ill make it clearer lol

[void oasis]

It's not that u have done anything wrong, I just am having a hard time figuring out what's what since it doesn't have color lol

[weak hemlock]

oh alright thanks pal

[weak hemlock]

so ye here hopefully its clearer lol

[void oasis]

Yay!! That looks soo good! I'd maybe suggest bringing the cheek bone up a smidge and then shifting the bridge of the nose over a touch :))

I did that rly quick with my finger so it's not accurate but just to show u what I'm talking about 😉

[weak hemlock]

ive moved to the coloring already rip,ig ill fix the nose because i havent render on it yet
but thanks man

[lean glade]

i think the hands too small, hands are usually the size of the face.

[void oasis]

Yes ofc!! And no worries lol it's no biggie

[weak hemlock]

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